Some people feel that human activities make the Earth a better place to live. In contrast, most people do not feel that way. They think that peoples, animals, and plants have to share same environment in the Earth. By human activities, animals and plants are being harmed.
First of all, animals are our natural friend which we live in same neighborhood. They really serve us to live well. For building apartments, stores, malls, people destroy their home. Every year, many forest terminating for building huge apartments. How about its inside? Do the people built any building for wolf, deer, squirrels, ants, and insects. While people use the animals for thons of reason, they do not protect very well when improving human`s life. Some animals became extinct by the time.
Seconds, plants are our world`s lungs to help us to breath. While without plants, our world cannot breathe, every year thousands of trees have been cut by people to make paper or other goods. Like animals, most plants are came extinct by human`s activities. Even though plants` and animals’ life related to each other, human being seems not to consider them. Many industries pollute the world by giving carbon monoxide to sky. By the time our lung became ill. It’s coughing despite smoking of human being.
In conclusion, people have to consider their roommate which is sharing in same place to live with them. Without protection, the Earth is being damaged by human activities. While people makes the Earth a better place to live, animals and plants, our world mates are being destroying by their neighbor. I think, we protect our world mates, instead of the destroy them.
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ReplyDeleteBut if you ask me, I would say you could choice different words in concluding paragraph because you restated the first paragraph in concluding paragraph by almost same word choices.
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